This book was interesting for awhile and when I say awhile I mean the first few chapters. It got really annoying really fast after that. First off the short of because is cause, not cos, and when all you can say is "cos" repeatedly in each chapter you need a new damn dictionary and thesaurus. Imagine this "cos, cos, cos, cos, cos, cos,cos" over and over and over again never using a different word because the vocabulary the author knows seems to be so tiny. And what is with the color white? From what I gathered in this book Gwen and Amy really seem to like the color white. Most of their house it white. Their store is white. Honestly it's not that hard to pick another color for your writing, to have some different words mixed in there with the cos and the white. Thirdly, they are incredibly obsessed with their looks which then leaves you to wonder about the author if so much of the focus is on clothing and make-up.
To be honest I didn't make it through this book because it drove me absolutely nuts. And this time it wasn't even because of how bad the grammar and punctuation was, what a shock right? Either way, I only made it halfway through this book before I stopped. I already covered the reasons why but here they are again: 1) over use of the word cos 2) the main color the person uses to describe a lot of things is white and 3) it was boring and it was a miracle that I made it halfway through the book.
Who knows, maybe in the very distant future I will be able to read the entire book but definitely not right now.
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